Sunday, May 2, 2010
Final Post!
Sunday, April 25, 2010
April 25
Sunday, April 11, 2010
April 11
Sunday, April 4, 2010
April 4
Sunday, March 14, 2010
March 14
Sunday, March 7, 2010
March 1-7
Sunday, February 28, 2010
February 22-28
I actually was very pleased with the feedback I received. This isn’t to say I didn’t expect my peers to be able to critique me or anything like that. I just worried they would be too nice to feel comfortable actually editing. And, yes, their comments were very kind and very diplomatic, but they were also helpful. They pointed out some grammatical things that I had missed (to my horror), along with stylistic suggestions. They pointed out what they liked as well as what they didn’t. Overall, it just gave me a really pleasant sense of community. It probably would have been better had I posted earlier in the week, but even at the point I did post, I got plenty of good response. I loved reading my peers’ work. I loved how there was very little overlap of experience in what I read. People made their own way in Second Life, just as they do in First Life. It’s all just really interesting. I don’t know that reading my peers’ work did too much to help with my revision. It marked a couple red flags, I suppose, to go back and check on, but that’s about the extent of it.